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Check out Squishy Speaks latest post - a very strange story about Eggbert Feebert.
The Lesser-Known Adventures of Eggbert Feebert It all started out with an Eggbert and a Feebert, neither of whom realized they were the only two things that existed in the entire emptiness of nothing. This is how the story begins. This is also how - for nine bazillion years - the story ends. Until, after nine bazillion years and one day something changed... Read More...
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4/5/2017 11:59:09 pm
Is the next chapter available already? I got curious when I read the title and read it immediately. I have to read the first chapter twice trying to understand it, but I guess it tends to confuse the readers first. I wonder why Eggbert and Feebert can't recognize each other, but felt as if they existed long time ago when they felt and noticed the presence of each other. I hope you can post the continuation of the story. You got my attention right there. 7/12/2017 02:07:04 am
I love how kid like the atmosphere of the story is but the message of it still very profound. Explaining what nothingness in this story can be very hard if you are trying to retain the light and amusing tone to the story, but you managed to do that while still explaining the elaborateness of the things happening around Eggbert and Feebert. I also love the way you made use of onomatopoeia in your story. I like where this story is going. Keep up the good work! Leave a Reply. |
Author:Amanda I. Greene This is where I share thoughtful, and sometimes unpolished, musings in the form of philosophical explorations, inspirations, poems, and artwork.
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